Monday, October 19, 2009
In The Empty
Not sure how frequently I'll be posting in the upcoming weeks since I'm starting my new job today... I went ahead and posted my first chapter for The Lost Children Chronicles... If you're interested, check it out and let me know what you think. I'm definitely experiencing significant myopia at this point, so any/all feedback is welcome. Thanks!
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Will go by later and check :)
ReplyDeleteI read it and liked it. I would have to get really nit-picky to find issues. I thought it was solid.
ReplyDeleteGood flow, paced well, nothing glaring jumped out at me. Nice job working in backstory. Tension and suspense building nicely. The hook is baited--I wanna know what happens next. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteCongrats on new job!
ReplyDeleteGood luck on your new job.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed chapter one. There were a couple of places were I was confused, but that could be due to the late hour or it could just be me. I've been confused all day.
I'll read it again tomorrow. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for the feedback, everyone. AM (and anybody else), if you have a chance, please let me know what threw you in even the slightest fashion. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteCongrats on the new job, Bane! I hope it doesn't cut into your writing time!
ReplyDeleteI'll check it out later and get back to you. Best of luck with the new job!
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry. I thought I would get back today, but I promise first thing in the morning. :0)
ReplyDeleteHey, no worries... I appreciate you taking the time in the first place. Thanks!
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