Good showing tends to be a bit harder for me not b/c I'm not a good show-er, but b/c I tend to be ADD in most things I do, including writing, and I'm always driving hard to get to the scene/chapter/section end in the fewest words possible (my agent might laugh at this since when she asked for a revision, hoping I could get down from 76k to 70k, I ended up sending her the MS at 87k... in the end, we ended up making it a bit longer before going on sub). But the final result is that sometimes I end up
I'm currently working on 2 big projects at the same time, a first for me, and this helps my focus issues to a degree, but I'm still falling into the trap more than I'd like. Do you have scene foibles, large scale or small, that you find yourself repeating, and, if so, how do you address them?
It sounds busy and exciting for you right now. Hope you find the balance in your writing. Have a super week! :O)
ReplyDeleteI don't think I do well in the telling department.
ReplyDeleteTell me what your book's about or where you're going with this scene? It always comes out like a jumbled mess. I know this isn't exactly what you're talking about. But, that's where my comment decided to take me =). It's so much easier for me to show what I mean through my writing.
When I write I'm not really in a rush to get the scene done...it's more like I get sucked into the scene. It may take a day or a few minutes to write. Really just depends...
I think I'm like you... I start with a very telly draft, and then go my way fleshing out. For instance, the first draft of my WIP was 23k. And the latest is 47k! :D
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